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Why do students prefer doing part time jobs during their studies? Do you think this has more advantage or disadvantage.

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In the competitive era, pupils are more possessive regarding their future. It has been observed that many pupils are preferred
doiy
time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis
day
part
time
 jobs while studying for their holistic development. As there are many other reasons
behint
further back than; at the back of; at the far side of
behind
 it. According to the information
this
 new trend provides both merits and demerits. To embark with the benefits of doing
part
time
 jobs during the academic study. The primary factor is the
gainiy
obtain
gaining
 more knowledge about the work
cultural
Suggestion
culture
.
Accept space
.
In other words
,
maximum number
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the maximum number
 of pupils are doing
part
time
 jobs only just for
enhance
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enhancing
enhanced
 their knowledge and get experience from them.
Furthermore
, after
completed
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completing
education
 if they join any company they easily understand all aspects.
However
, many pupils are doing
part
time
 jobs to increase their financial background as it will helpful in the future to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the dreams. Every rose has its thorn
,
Accept space
,
if student doing
part
time
 jobs while
their
people in general
they
 study, it gives some drawbacks. The
first
 and foremost is the major
destraction
mental turmoil
distraction
destruction
distractions
,
Accept space
,
they could neglect their
study
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studies
 as a consequence, it can be adversely
effect
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effected
 on their academic performance.
Secondly
, working while
education
 leaves the students with less or
not
referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
time
 to nurture their hobbies and talents. In conclusion, working while studying
providy
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provides
provide
proved
 more demerits than the merits. As everyone has realised the worth of
education so, it
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education, so it
 is more essential completed
education
first
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first, then
then
preper
make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc
prepare
 themselves to indulge in work
cultural
Suggestion
culture
cultures
.
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