Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that we can predict a
person’s
culture and character from their choice of clothing. While I do admit that a person’s
outward appearance tells
a lot about express in words
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It is possible to guess a person’s
background and nature from
their clothes. Suggestion
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However
, one may not be able to predict their character and values. A person always wearing religious or traditional costumes may reveal their devotional and spiritual nature. A usually decent and formally clad individual portrays simplicity and modesty. Multi-colored
and flashy outfits can indicate a having color or a certain color; sometimes used in combination
coloured
person’s
exuberant and lively nature. For example
, entertainers and celebrities are often seen wearing jazzy
dresses. so thin as to transmit light
gauzy
Also
, an odd-colored
, having color or a certain color; sometimes used in combination
coloured
loosely
-fitted and shabby clothing may be an indicator of a careless attitude.
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Nevertheless
, I feel that outward appearance and looks can be deceptive. It may disguise a person’s
true inner self and any malevolent intent. For example
, some imposters donning sacred robes and religious symbols may defraud innocent followers. This
was evidently seen in the recent criminal cases filed against self-proclaimed saints in India. Moreover
, a person’s
choice of clothing cannot always be used as a reflection of their character in general. To cite an example, a woman wearing light and short clothes for her comfort may incorrectly be perceived as indecent in some countries.
In summary, a person’s
style of dressing can be an indicator of their thought patterns, and outlook towards life and culture. It can also
show some of their qualities and attributes. However
, it would be incorrect to draw a conclusion about someone based on their external appearance.Submitted by marwahesha00 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
