Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Making children to do their b

est a

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do

nd motivating children to outperform others are considered to be two advantages of encouraging

sense

of

comp

etiti

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a sense

on in children. Persuading children to compete with each other could result in forcing them to try more, because they attempt to win a math which needs an especial effort.

For instance

, when children endeavor to g

et high

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavour

mark

in

school, t

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high marks

a high mark

hey must study hard. After getting some high score, they try to outperform others at the

second

step. It means not only is getting high

mark

imp

ortant fo

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a high mark

high marks

r them but

also

being f

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them, but

irs person i

n group is

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the first person

the firs person

a firs person

sign

ifica

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the group

a group

nt.

As a result

, when children grow up, they utilize their ability in re

al life

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abilities

which learned from

competition

in childhood.

In contrast

amplification of

competition

sense

in children could pose problems like putting a

lot

of pressure on them as well as making them selfish and fraudulent. When only thing is about wining, they

become

succeeding with great difficulty

winning

selfish and cheater because they do not help others a

lot

if it is about studies

also

they try to find other alternative way just to win like cheating. As child work hard in studding and

learning

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

to receive excellent

mar

k, they put a

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an excellent mark

the excellent mark

excellent marks

lot

of pressure on themselves. A recent research shows some of student of a

school

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the student

study at home for 6 hours in a day to achieve success in getting high

mark

. Learning from each other and

team

working skill are argued to be two results of strengthening

sense

of co-o

perat

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the sense

ing in children. It is obvious that children learn from one another via cooperating.

For example

, when I was an elementary school child, I learned basketball from my classmate and we learned a

lot

of basketball skill from each other,

finally

we arranged a

team

and won

first

place in provincial tournament. Other benefit

of c

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Another

o-operating is learning

team

working which is very important these days. Today ability of

team

working is necessary to find a good job. In my opinion both

of

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opinion, both

competition

and co-operating

sen

se are im

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operative

portant to nurture children but

co-operating

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children, but

is

more impo

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operation

rtant than competitive

sense

.