You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see

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Dear Manager, I am Rohan Roy, I am travelling today with your airline flight A159. from UAE to Canada at 9:30 PM but I am writing

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letter to express my concern about facing problems at the airport related to my Baggage transportation and boarding pass. I have 20 kg overweight luggage for that I have to Rs. 40000 INR. which is more than the normal charge per kg. I want to ask you why

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The

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time when I travelled at that time I paid Rs.500 per kg. now why there is sudden drastic changes compared to the previous amount

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I am having a problem getting the boarding pass because I requested it on the spot for The window seat I am ready to pay extra charges for that. Your crew members are telling us that we do not have a window seat. Please I am requesting you to decrease the charges for the luggage bags because

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unaffordable for a normal person. Kindly think about my request. Thank you in advance. Regards, Rohan Roy

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider organizing your content more clearly by addressing each of the outlined areas separately. This would enhance the logical flow of your letter

Task Achievement

Ensure to clearly highlight that besides baggage, the boarding pass issue is another distinct problem faced at the airport.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter effectively opens with an introduction and ends with a polite closing.

Task Achievement

You have successfully included your flight details and clearly stated the problems experienced.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

flight details
flight number
arrival time
departure time
baggage claim
customer service
long queues
staff attitude
improvement suggestions
enhanced training
clear signage
lost luggage
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