Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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In recent times,
overpopulation
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of cities has led to
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of many different kinds purposefully arranged but lacking any uniformity
various
problems.
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essay will discuss these issues and
profer
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proffer
prefer
solutions to it at both
government
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and individual level.
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, one of the major problems of
overpopulation
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is pollution. As the
population
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of a place/city increases, there is great demand
on
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for
available resources. There will be
expansion
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an expansion
of railway, factories, industry and airport.
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will lead to more production of
carbondioxide which
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carbon dioxide, which
carbon dioxide which
will eventually lead to depletion of
ozone layer
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the ozone layer
and global warming.
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is in line with a study carried out in the Bell University, Nigeria and shows a positive correlation between densely populated urban centres and significant depletion of
ozone layer
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the ozone layer
.
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,
increase
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the increase
an increase
increases
in
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population
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the population
of cities will lead to
exponential rise
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an exponential rise
in crime rate. Due to the fact that resources are limited and demand is far more than the supply,
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will result in large
number
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amount
of people pressing for scarce commodity and the deprived
population
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will have to
result
have recourse to
resort
to crime. The menace of
overpopulation
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can be curbed by both
government
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and individuals. In the
first
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place, education is key in preventing overcrowding. It is often noticed that people that are illiterate gave birth to many
children which
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children, which
will result in
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overcrowding.
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is what India is experiencing. If individual and
government
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can ensure
proper education
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a proper education
for its citizens,
overpopulation
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will be reduced.
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, villages can be developed so that the villagers will not migrate to cities for employment.
For example
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, the capital of Nigeria was
initially
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Lagos but was moved to Abuja
thereafter
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.
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actually develop
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actually develops
the
later
steps consisting of two parallel members connected by rungs; for climbing up or down
ladder
that was once a village. In conclusion, increase in
population
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that we
experience
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are experiencing
in our cities today has a lot of
problems but
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problems, but
I believe that through concerted effort of individuals and
government
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this
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problem will be a thing of the past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • strain on infrastructure
  • public services
  • overcrowded
  • inadequate healthcare services
  • pressure on educational institutions
  • environmental impact
  • increased pollution
  • waste management
  • destruction of green spaces
  • natural habitats
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