Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievement and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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mega stars are renowned for their accomplishment I would have you that they are celebrated for their charisma and assets which creates a negative influence on the youths.
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, supporters of the idea that these icons are prominent for their success have one main reason for
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statement.They believe that they are a source of inspiration to these youngsters because they share their personal life sacrifices to
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group and instill confidence that they can be like them if they work hard.
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gives a positive influence on their lifestyle.
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argument stand up to scrutiny.
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is because these Mega Stars talk about substance abuse and take them like it is safe and have nothing to lose to illustrate the popular drug Xanax is widely used and spread among these people and strange and the students see it every day and take them
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of these youngsters end up in rehabilitation centres and support group.
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, creating a negative impact on the children and their lifestyle. In con
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uld argue that these celebrities are widely known for their charisma and fortune which poses a negative influence and government should provide sanctions on the celebrities and their lifestyles.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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