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Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way do you agree or disagree.

#people #hobby
On one hand, some people believe that, challenging the body or their
mind
 able to get excited as a matter
of
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about
by
, They spend their free time on exciting activities rather than enjoyable things.
For instance
, some keen to try tough
activites
any specific behavior
activities
 like Bungee jumping, fast driving, Parachuting, water diving and boating. These activities stimulate the
stress
 on their bodies so that, Extraordinary hormones will produce
body
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a body
 because of
stress
, at the same time, They feel the spirit of their a body and
mind
 after
this
 target will achieved by them.
On the other hand
, Who argues that relaxing activity and
decreaesing
becoming less or smaller
decreasing
stress
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Stress
 are consider from
having
any place of complete bliss and delight and peace
heaven
Heaven
a
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A
 simple hobbies. People spent
a
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A
 lot of time for
achieve
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achieving
 their day
today
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to day
life even
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life, even
 though, If they feel free at that moment, most of the people prefer to
do
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Do
 normal things
such
 as
watching
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Watching
 tv, Singing, walking, dancing and collecting stamps
..
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..
 Etc. These activities will help not only to reduce their
stress but
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stress, but
also
 improving their health and their
mind
. Reading books
provide
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Provide
 better knowledge and relaxing their
mind
. To the best of my knowledge, people focus on doing relaxing hobbies obviously, They tolerate to live in modern speed life in order to avoid the risk activities maybe help to reduce unexpected accident.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of accomplishment
  • overcoming obstacles
  • gratifying
  • continuous source of enjoyment
  • relaxing activities
  • unwind and de-stress
  • counterproductive
  • mental break
  • subjective
  • personal preference
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