You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

Problems like the climate change, overpopulation and the lack of education are a huge concern. It has been said that as the way a
population
is rising with declining
literacy
rate
, it would be a severe situation in our
country
, after a decade. In order to solve
this
problem,
this
essay will discuss about, how with the help of our
government
and by building
number
of schools and collages, it can be solved.
Firstly
, the
country
like India the
population
growth has always been high. It is due to lack of awareness among the people and a very less
number
of educated people in the
country
. It has been seen that if a society is uneducated, there people do not have logical thinking about what could be the consequences of giving, birth to a
number
of children.
For example
, a survey done by the Delhi
government
illustrates that there are over fifty percent of the
population
in our
country
are illiterate and most of the families have a
number
of children than they should have. So, the
literacy
rate
and the overpopulation are directly proportional to each other.
This
can be solved if the
government
makes a law which implies that no more than two children are allowed to give birth in a family.
This
kind of law is already in use by China and the result was in their favour, their
population
growth has declined now.
In addition
to that, it can
also
overcome by reducing
literacy
rate
in our
country
by constructing a
number
of public school and colleges. As data given by
Literacy
Oraganization, shows that children are not able to go to school due less
number
schools available with affordable fees. So, in order to get rid of
this
problem, it is needed that our
government
should open public schools and implement a
population
control law. In conclusion,
Although
the amount of
literacy
rate
is decreasing due to a
population
increase, it can be taken care by educating the uneducated people of our
country
, and
this
can be done with the involvement of our
government
.

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