A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the position to do voluntary work at the National Arts Museum.
The reason why I am interested in working as a volunteer guide at your museum is that I am deeply interested in arts and history. More specifically, I would like to use my time at the museum to develop my knowledge of historical events such
as the Black Death.
Regarding my qualifications, I have been studying Fine Arts for three years now and my knowledge of artistic movements, such
as Surrealism, is extensive. Additionally
, my communication skills are excellent and I have been told I am very charismatic to strangers.
Concerning the day I can start working, that would be the first of July. My schedule will be free during business hours, Monday to Friday, but I can also
work during weekends, if necessary.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to receiving your response soon.
Yours faithfully,
Amanda LagoSubmitted by amandacflago23 on
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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logical structure
You've structured the letter well, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal, fitting the letter's context.
complete response
You efficiently communicated your availability and eagerness to volunteer, which aligns well with the task's requirements.
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