This is a technology area. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

#technology #area

Today, the internet has become the most important part of our lives in every field. The net has dramatically given the best way to get some information. I completely say that it is a good thing for our present and future lives.

Firstly

, due to the internet, computer has changed human lives for their work and education as well.

Moreover

, book learning is

also

dependent on the

web

For instance

, a laptop is the best thing for us with the help of the

web

because in any company the work cannot be done without the laptop. The media are becoming an important part of our lives with the help of the net and technology as well. The hi tech plays an indispensable role with the help of the

web

as well.

Secondly

, the book learning is found to start online as compared to on campus so that the disabled people who can not go to the university or college can

also

get education online and make their lives better.

For example

, mobile is called the invention of neon technology. Today, every person has a mobile because it is cheaply and easily available in the market. Because of the mobile and the net, children can learn new things in their lives by playing education related games so their mind will develop and even skills will

also

improve. Even the

web

is becoming cheaper due to the advancement of technology. To summarize, without the online network, we cannot live our life so because in every field to get information we need the internet.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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