This is a technology area. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Today, the internet has become the most important part of our lives in every field. The net has dramatically given the best way to get some information. I completely say that it is a good thing for our present and future lives.
Firstly
, due to the internet, computer has changed human lives for their work and education as well.
Moreover
, book learning is
also
dependent on the
web
.
For instance
, a laptop is the best thing for us with the help of the
web
because in any company the work cannot be done without the laptop. The media are becoming an important part of our lives with the help of the net and technology as well. The hi tech plays an indispensable role with the help of the
web
as well.
Secondly
, the book learning is found to start online as compared to on campus so that the disabled people who can not go to the university or college can
also
get education online and make their lives better.
For example
, mobile is called the invention of neon technology. Today, every person has a mobile because it is cheaply and easily available in the market. Because of the mobile and the net, children can learn new things in their lives by playing education related games so their mind will develop and even skills will
also
improve. Even the
web
is becoming cheaper due to the advancement of technology. To summarize, without the online network, we cannot live our life so because in every field to get information we need the internet.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overstated
  • fundamentally altering our experiences
  • significant advancements
  • telemedicine
  • robotic surgeries
  • personalized medicine
  • educational apps
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • criticisms
  • automation
  • digital divide
  • privacy and cybersecurity
  • acknowledging
  • potential drawbacks
  • quality of life
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