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Some people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live in a country where the language is being spoken. What is your opinion about this?

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The Joy of learning a new
language
 knows no bound and,
as a result
, it is thought by some that in
order
 to accurately be an expert in a new
language
, it is expected for
one
 to live in the state where
this
language
 is being uttered. I believe
this
 assertion is true for a number of reasons.
To begin
 with, when an individual
lives
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life
 in a
country
 where the
language
 is being spoken, he will learn it without adulteration and more in-depth. To put in another
way
, nobody or machine will be able to teach
one
 a new
language
 correctly asides
indigenes
originating where it is found
indigenous
indulgence
 of that nation,
consequently
, it is important that
one
 spends a while with them in their
country
 in
order
 to know the intricacies and the root of the
language
.
For example
, Mr Mark an English teacher wanted to learn French; and had been using an app, but to no avail, he was not getting it. The week he decided to move to France, he was able to piece together the missing links and he became an expert within a month. A feat he could not achieve using the internet.
Furthermore
, I believe that in
order
 to learn and understand a
language
 effectively, it is important that
one
 familiarizes with the people's
way
 of life, virtues and history.
Moreover
, there is no better
way
 to learn these things than living in that
country even
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country, even
 if it's for a short while.
Also
,
this
 will help the person understand the different reasons behind certain expressions during conversations and aid in learning more about the root of the dialect. To illustrate, in a movie titled "new
language
", the actor, after learning Yoruba for years using an app, decided it was time to visit Nigeria.
However
, on getting there, he realised that he found it difficult to interact with the natives because he had no inkling of their
way
 of life. If he had taken the pain to visit while learning, he would have been able to flawlessly converse like a natural. In conclusion, living in a
country
 in
order
 to learn their
language
 is necessary because it prevents adulteration and
also
 helps
one
 to know about the culture of the people.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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