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Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product or a service. Do you agree or disagree?

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I would agree that money plays a major role in terms of buying anything. In
this
 essay, it is going to be discussed about why
price
 of any goods matters. If a high quality
product
 is available with low
price
, most of the people, prefer to buy that. In fact, people always spend most of their time in the market to get items with cheap
price
.
Firstly
, the quality of a good should be considered
first
, but if it is so costly
then
 some people think of, buying a low quality
product
. For the people of our country do not earn well, most of them come from a very humble background, it is quite difficult for them to buy something, which is really prohibitive. In support of
this
, in Delhi there is a market named Sarojani Nagar, people generally go there for shopping because everything available there is at very low cost.
Secondly
, there are lots of markets in India, where products are cheaper, but even there people search around in those markets from a morning
untill
up to, before the time
until
 the evening so that they could find
product
 of less
price
. All these shows that people are so desperate to buy some goods, but with a very minimum rate.
Although
 some people are really wealthy and they do not contemplate about the
price
 of a
product
, yet most of the people in India are living under poverty line so,
price
 matters for them. In conclusion, I would say that people do not spend their money in an extravagant manner to buy a
product
 because their incomes are already very low.
Hence
, they look for the
price
 more than anything, in order to buy a
product
.

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