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In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through internet, that they can just as well study at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that nowadays people could just receive mass
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 affecting conventional schools to be not as crucial as ever.
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, some still believe that the classroom and teacher’s role cannot be changed to educate students.
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 with, the learning process is getting more flexible and accessible because of technological breakthrough. Via searching engines,
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 as Google and YouTube, the learners could obtain various materials they need.
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, others argue that it by far poses a double edge sword impact. Students, especially children, and teenagers should be guided by professional educators. Unclear explanations in
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 might lead us to misconception and unintentionally the users would possibly open negative website. My own experience could be a good illustration of
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 case. When I was in a primary school, I, without any purpose, clicked the advertising item which provided adult contents. Seeing that my teacher came fast to close that website.
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, the
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 is only a device which everyone could share much
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, whether evidence-based or hoax
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 directing us to unreliable resources.
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, it is generally convinced that children who involve homeschooling tend to be introvert individuals.
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 might because they do not experience social interaction in a classroom. With that, insensitiveness to the surrounding is closer to them than the students in conventional schools. To conclude, I would claim that the
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 could not ever overtake the role of classroom schools, in the case of trained teachers. It is because the
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 consists of untrustworthy
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