Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern society, some
people
believe that the main environmental problems of our time are the Use synonyms
loss
of Use synonyms
species
of Use synonyms
plants
and Use synonyms
animals
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while
other Linking Words
people
argue that there are more important environmental problems. In my opinion, I personally believe that there are more critical Use synonyms
issues
than the Use synonyms
loss
of Use synonyms
species
.
On the one hand, I agree that the extinction of Use synonyms
plants
and Use synonyms
animals
is the most serious environmental issue. In fact, Use synonyms
plants
and Use synonyms
animals
are interrelated, Use synonyms
therefore
the Linking Words
loss
of one Use synonyms
species
can lead to the Use synonyms
loss
of other Use synonyms
species
. Use synonyms
For example
, if Linking Words
plants
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died
, many of the herbivores that feed off it will Wrong verb form
die
also
die, Linking Words
while
many carnivores will die because of the Linking Words
dead
of herbivores. Replace the word
death
Additionally
, the Linking Words
loss
of Use synonyms
species
will reduce biodiversity. Biodiversity is important because certain Use synonyms
species
have important applications in medicine and chemical industries.
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On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
consider that there are more serious environmental Use synonyms
issues
, Use synonyms
such
as water Linking Words
pollution
, Use synonyms
air
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pollution
and the effect of climate Use synonyms
changed
. Replace the word
change
For example
, many Linking Words
people
have respiratory disease in China because of Use synonyms
air
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pollution
. Statistics Use synonyms
indicated
that more than 13 Wrong verb form
indicate
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
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died
each year because of Wrong verb form
die
the
Correct article usage
apply
air
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pollution
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, global warming is a serious environmental issue, if the earth continues to experience rising, it will start to become uninhabitable for Linking Words
human
, especially for Fix the agreement mistake
humans
marines’
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marines
animals
.
By way of conclusion, I personally believe that there are more important environmental Use synonyms
issues
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such
as Linking Words
air
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pollution
and global warming, Use synonyms
although
the Linking Words
loss
of Use synonyms
species
of Use synonyms
plants
and Use synonyms
animals
is the most serious environmental Use synonyms
Use synonyms
issues
.Fix the agreement mistake
issue
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Content
The essay demonstrates confusion in the personal stand. The statement 'In my opinion, I personally believe that there are more critical issues than the loss of species.' contradicts later when the writer calls species loss 'the most serious environmental issues.'
Development
The ideas presented in some instances are not developed fully. For example, 'Biodiversity is important because certain species have important applications in medicine and chemical industries.' could have been further explained.
Grammar
'Effect of climate changed' needs to be revised to 'effects of climate change'. Check grammar carefully.
Sentence Construction
'it will start to become uninhabitable for human, especially for marines’ animals.' - this sentence structure is incorrect. Try revising sentences for management of ideas.