Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In modern society, some

people

believe that the main environmental problems of our time are the

loss

of

species

of

plants

and

animals

,

while

other

people

argue that there are more important environmental problems. In my opinion, I personally believe that there are more critical

issues

than the

loss

of

species

. On the one hand, I agree that the extinction of

plants

and

animals

is the most serious environmental issue. In fact,

plants

and

animals

are interrelated,

therefore

the

loss

of one

species

can lead to the

loss

of other

species

.

For example

, if

plants

died

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, many of the herbivores that feed off it will

also

die,

while

many carnivores will die because of the

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of herbivores.

Additionally

, the

loss

of

species

will reduce biodiversity. Biodiversity is important because certain

species

have important applications in medicine and chemical industries.

On the other hand

, some

people

consider that there are more serious environmental

issues

,

such

as water

pollution

,

air

pollution

and the effect of climate

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.

For example

, many

people

have respiratory disease in China because of

air

pollution

. Statistics

indicated

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that more than 13

percent

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of

people

died

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each year because of

the

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air

pollution

.

Additionally

, global warming is a serious environmental issue, if the earth continues to experience rising, it will start to become uninhabitable for

human

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humans

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, especially for

marines’

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animals

. By way of conclusion, I personally believe that there are more important environmental

issues

such

as

air

pollution

and global warming,

although

the

loss

of

species

of

plants

and

animals

is the most serious environmental

issues

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.