Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. What is your view? Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Despite the positive effects of

globalisation

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, its drawbacks to the world’s economies should be considered. I agree with

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statement that governments should allow international companies, but they

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support local businesses. I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that

globalisation

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has

many advantages stems from technology. The

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advantage is more production. Because modern technology and global industry have more capacity to build more goods.

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, a car factory is able to

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produce

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thousand

cars in a week due to their advanced machines. The

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advantage is more

quality

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products which make global companies. Again, they have high

quality

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cars compared to local brands. It can be the

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advantage of

globalisation

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is less costly products. For that

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reason

,

globalisation

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have

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has

many positive sides.

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, it has some detrimental effects on local businesses. Some local brands might be close and some local products may disappear, because they cannot compete with international companies. It is not easy for local industries

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have

the same

quality

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and the same number of multinational products with low costs.

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, global firms might delete

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the local ones

. I think we should support

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due to the productivity in the industry, more

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and cheaper

goods

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goods, however

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, local products should be protected and supported by governments. These are might be some tax reduces or long term credits with low interest rates. In conclusion, positive effects of

globalisation

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are obvious;

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, it threats local brands.

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, in order to protect our local

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companies'

governments should support them.

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, local firms live longer.