In many developing countries, there is an increased movement of workers from rural areas in to cities. Why do you think this happens? What problems can this cause?

Nowadays, employees are shifting from towns and villages to cities in many growing countries. I thought
this
movement is happening due to more development and facility,
this
cause some issue to others who stayed there. The main reason for
this
movement to the city is rural areas were not developed, less job opportunity, less facilities, less bus availability, some utilities and life styles.
For instance
, towns have had only 1 or 2 hospitals, school and very rare to see the college, so parents are struggling to find good options for their kids. Compare to the cities, towns has fewer employment due to less private companies and government offices,
also
it has some enjoyment places to spend their holidays. Another drawback is to get bus immediately, you have to wait for the bus for a long time, but in cities you don't need to wait for that long, no train facilities. Due to worker's movement into city causes less income for shops, theatres and restaurants, it creates unemployment. For many decades, people are satisfied to work in their areas and some has own business, now they sold sold their business including their place where they live. At
last
, the population has reduced to one
third
of ratio,
however
, some would like to stay at their places who spend their money in agriculture. Some farmers sold their farm land to industries which are destroyed by them and building their factories. To recapitulate, workers usability in villages is less than developed areas and it is hard to stay with less travel facility and hospitality.
This
causes less humidity and it spoils some lives who running their own shops.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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