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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my interest in
participation
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 in the
up-coming
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upcoming
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 Business Marketing seminar
in
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at
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 our head office which is located in Austin. I received an email that I have been chosen for
this
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 project and have to
work
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over-time
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 if necessary. I am glad to
work
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 under supervision again and happy to be a part of your team. I would greatly appreciate
if
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it if
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 you can send
the
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detailed information on the project we have received and who are the clients and what are their requirements.
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, let me know the dates and the program schedule so that I will make myself prepare for
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next
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the next
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 few months, and will finish off my pending reports.
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, where will be our
accomodation
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accommodation
 would be and what will be the costs included? If possible, let me know the time when can we have a face-to-face conversation about the
work
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 seminar. I hope our company is spending
for
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 our
accomodation
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accommodation
 like
last
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 year. I am greatly excited for
this
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 opportunity to
work
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 with our head-office staff which can improve my progress and
productivities
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 and hope it will be recognised for my promotion. I thank you so much and you are so helpful. I wish all the success to our near endeavours. Godspeed! Yours faithfully, Madhuri
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