Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be used in specnt anyways. To what extent do u agree.

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Spending

money

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on the arts by the

government

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is always a subject of debate and considered to be as a double-edge sword. Some people claim that spending

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on the arts is a wastage and they

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argue that

government

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should pay less focus on arts section.

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, I extremely disagree with

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notion and claim that it's our moral duty to save our culture and

government

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should allocate funds in order to maintain the beauty of our rich heritage culture.

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with, Art is what differentiate us from animals.

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, with the help of arts like dancing and singing we can express our emotions. With the help of arts person can get name and fame not only in their nation, but

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in the whole globe.

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, if a nation has a good artistic view and historical status,

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it can

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attract tourism and

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way the

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can earn

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from the tourists. For an instance, In whole globe, India is known as rich culture and history and in the year 2015, Indian

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earns 5 million rupees from tourists.

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, spending

money

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for the arts is not a waste of

money

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. On the other side, because of the existing issues in nation like empowerment, poverty etc. Are increasing on a daily basis. That's why, many people claim that the

government

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should pay less attention to the arts and pay more focus on existing problems.

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, they believe that if they open any school or university or any hospital with

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money

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it's beneficial for the local community.

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, Canadian

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allocates less funds accounted for only 0.5% of their budget for the arts and rest all they allocate on other sectors. That's why Canadian education is very popular among the international students. In conclusion, man is a social animal and the art is the only way with which we can express our feelings. No doubt

government

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should pay more focus on existing issues, but the importance of the arts cannot be neglected, So, spending

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for the arts is not a waste of

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