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Certain individuals are of the opinion that learning institutions should include pupils in education

administration

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, I completely disagree with

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viewpoint because it will make the learning curriculum cumbersome

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, children have interests which may be different from managing an institution.

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, involving pupils in

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activity

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makes

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make

their learning curriculum complicated and most kids have

natural inclination

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a natural inclination

towards other activities. Nowadays, it takes twelve weeks to complete a school term

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- in which most subjects are not properly covered.

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, any additional course, subject or

activity

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will affect

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affected

the already existing courses, and even make the syllabus longer. More so, learners will derive lesser value from the courses because the duration will likely be shortened due to the addition of another

activity

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, children are born with natural interests in certain activities

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as sports, music or arts and these helps to drive their choice of a career. I believe they should be encouraged to participate in their niche areas for

better

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a better future

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, there will be limited job opportunities in learning

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in the

future

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, and children should not be made to spend time on an

activity

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that has little or no prospect. A recent survey indicated that there will be a decline in the growth of academic related jobs within the

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fifteen years.

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is as

result

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a result

of the increasing use of Artificial Intelligence in learning, and school

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, Udemy uses specially designed softwares to engage its learners. In conclusion,

academics

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academic

administration

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has little or no prospect in

the nearest

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the near

future

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, syllabuses will become too bulky by the addition of

this

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activity

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, children may have other interests that will impact positively on their

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future

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future, hence

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, priority should be given to their passion.

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