University should accept the equal number of male and female student in each subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement

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Education is the a
rudimently
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right of every student which decide their future and that of
nation
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nations
.According to some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
, the number of girls and
boys children
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boys, children
admitted
in
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into
university
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is same in each subject.
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, there will be no meaning of merit, if the
university
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seat
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are reserved
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is reserved
on the bases of gender. Many
interlligent
having the capacity for thought and reason especially to a high degree
intelligent
will not get
admission
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. Almost every
university
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in the
world giving
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world, giving
admission
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to both girl and boy students on the bases of their skill and
merit but
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merit, but
in some
university
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of my country, there is
reservation
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reserved
for girls students. The main disadvantage is that
interlligent
having the capacity for thought and reason especially to a high degree
intelligent
student of other
catgory
a collection of things sharing a common attribute
category
can not get
addmision
the act of admitting someone to enter
admission
.
Secondly
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,
seat
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on the basis of gender is different in
intreast
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
of men and women.
Specifically
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Specific
course like
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course, like
nursing and other medical course female have more attentiveness toward
this
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kind of course. As
womenare
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women are
polite in nature so they can treat the patient more
accuratly
with few mistakes
accurately
. If half of
seat
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arre reserved
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is reserved
are reserved
or reserved
area reserved
for male than
manyof
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many of
them
beecome
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
became
vacant so due to
this
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many female candidates can not get
admission
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due to reservation of male candidates.
Simultaneously men
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Simultaneously, men
have more fascinate toward technology and other engineering field, if half of
seat
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is reserved for
female candidate
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female candidates
a female candidate
than most of
seat
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become vacant so, many
interlligent
having the capacity for thought and reason especially to a high degree
intelligent
men students
not get
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don't get
aren't getting
admission
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. In
concluson
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
, I
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
disagree with the writer
statment
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
and according to my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
admission
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in any subject in
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university
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universities
the university
should be given on the bases of the merit.

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