The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
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contemporary era, upbringing a
child
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has a huge impact on parents. There is an argument rise whether
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the parents are equally responsible for raising their
child
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. I strongly agree that it’s
both
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the
parent
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onus to
up bring their
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bring up their
child
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, making an equal contribution.
Firstly
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, the
child
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loves the company of
both
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the
parent
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and it encourages him to move forward
on
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with
a positive attitude. When children get attention equally from
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the sides, it makes them learn better and become a good citizen.
This
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scenario can only be seen when the mother and father make effort to up bring their
child
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by sharing duties equally.
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, in
this
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21st century,
both
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the
parent
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goes to work. And do not have enough
time
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to spend
time
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with the
child
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. In
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situation, they should have the proper
time
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management to give his/her
child
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the quality
time
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and can
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
all his/her requirements.
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, it is always advisable to split the
child
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work equally among
both
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the
parent
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with good understanding. So, that it should not burden on one side. In some scenario where the
child
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gets single attention can
lead problems in
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lead to problems in
their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and
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some
time
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leads to psychological disorders.
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, one of my friend’s children was not attended with the equal care he deserves from
both
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the
parent
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. As there was no proper conversation with him, he got a problem in his speech and some other issues as well. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
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the
parent
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have
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has
equal responsibility in raising a
child
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for his betterment. In
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way, there are growing a responsible youth, a future husband or wife and
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but not the least a good human being.
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