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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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In
this
 contemporary era, being a good
parent
 plays a vital role in improving upbringing of a
child
. Many individual thinks that teaching
young person
Suggestion
a young person
young people
 to be a good
parent
 in schools would be a moral idea. In my opinion, I don’t completely agree with
this
 statement. For being a good
parent
one
 has to be a good person.
Firstly
, in my opinion the schools should teach the youth to be a righteous person rather than a good
parent
. The
one
 who
have
Suggestion
has
 good environment around and
ability
Suggestion
able
 to deal with the society, having good family backgrounds can be a good
parent
. The youth need to be taught about the morals of the society and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 changes in his/her life.
This
 can be added to be great parenting. I do not find that the youngsters have the ability to understand the importance of parenting.
Secondly
, let’s talk the abilities of the individual to be a good
parent
. I strongly believe that to be a good
parent
one
 has to be good will power. So that they can easily tackle the different sort of
child
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
.
Furthermore
, it is
also
 vital to be a good listener, to be a good
child
 partner to make them comfortable.
Although
, every
parent
love
Suggestion
loves
 their children unconditionally, but parents should not forget to draw a line when it’s come to discipline and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 of a
child
. “A good parenting leaves a
child
 with good citizen”. To conclude, the skills required to be a good
parent
is
Suggestion
are
 so much connected with being a righteous human being. If
one
 values the other life most of the problems can be solved. So, teaching being a good human can improve the parenting site as well.
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