Culture is turning similar around the world. What are reasons? What are the positive and negative aspects?
In the past, the
world
had different culture
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cultures
however
, these days culture
has influenced other traditional customs as if people
are celebrating one
culture
in the whole world
. Globalization and dependency are the contributing factor
behind Change the noun form
factors
this
. There are several advantages and disadvantages behind
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to
this
scenario.
To begin
with, people
prefer to celebrate similar things, so that one
corner of the world
has the same attitude towards convention and genre as the other part of the world
. For example
, in European countries, people
celebrate Christmas, Easter Sunday, and New Year. Similarly
, in Asian terrains, young and older people
love to enjoy the moment at the same time. The reason is that people
would love to rely on others.To cite an instance, Asians can not produce such
as electronic items, transports and chemicals, while
Asian people
can provide them agricultural
goods. As they interact with each other for business Change preposition
with agricultural
purpose
, they have taken the Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
culture
from each other.
The first positive aspect is that people
are showing a sense of unity which helps them to communicate with the business people
and also
teaches us to make stronger relationships among people
whether they are African, or, whether, they are Asian. Moreover
, celebrating same
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the same
culture
succours people
to reduce
the distance between Change preposition
by reducing
people
, which not only make
them friendlyCorrect subject-verb agreement
makes
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
enrich
them with the same knowledge. The negative aspect is that if Correct subject-verb agreement
enriches
people
celebrate same
tradition, there would be no variety among Change the article
the same
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the nation
nation
. Fix the agreement mistake
nations
Consequently
, the different shade
of colour of various festivals would fade, Fix the agreement mistake
shades
for instance
, if New year
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Year
becomes
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became
one
fiesta in the world
, other cultural festivals would extinct like Arabic's New year
"Maharrum". Capitalize word
Year
Furthermore
, we would see one
day, people
are
wearing Unnecessary verb
apply
same
costumes, eating Correct article usage
the same
same
foods, et Cetra.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the same
culture
makes the whole globe in one
colour which is only for the relying attitude and globalization that has both merits and demerits mentioned above.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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