Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages?

Technological innovations
is becoming
Suggestion
are becoming
increasingly popular, especially for the professionals. Telecommuting plays a vital role for people who prefer working from
home
, conducting training sessions, and business meeting online.
This
essay shall
disuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
few benefits and negatives of
this
situation, and why I strongly believe that
negatices
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negatives
could be offset by remarkable
postives
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positives
. There are several issues in not carrying out professional
work
by physically being present at the place of origin of the
work
.
To begin
with, if an individual works from
home
or works online, away from
office
Suggestion
the office
, they require a peaceful environment just like
office
atmosphere so that they can concentrate 100 percent. It has generally been seen that,
work
from
home
or anywhere outside
office
disturbs the concentration.
Furthermore
, a good internet connection is always needed for telecommuters.
For instance
, if a person conducts a meeting from his
home
's basement, the internet connection might disconnect
frequently which
Accept comma addition
frequently, which
leaves
an
Suggestion
a
bad impression on the employer or other business partners.
Conversely
, there are apparent compelling reasons why employers and employees enjoys telecommuting. If an individual is working online, it saves them time as well as travel expenses. They do not have to spend a portion of
thei
Suggestion
the in
the i
the hi
income on public transport or petrol and diesel, if they
have private vechile
Suggestion
have a private vehicle
have private vehicle
. While the employees
are benefited
Suggestion
benefit
from
this
, it
also help
Suggestion
also helps
companies and employers.
For instance
, new recruits
usually requires
Suggestion
usually require
two months training sessions for developing practical skills to understand
structure ant nature
Suggestion
the structure and nature
the structure ant nature
of
work
Suggestion
the work
of the organization. With the help of internet facilities, these sessions could be completed effectively and
efforlessley
without effort or apparent effort
effortlessly
. To conclude, there is no doubt that with the help of technological advancements
lefe
a characteristic state or mode of living
life
has become easy. Though there are
few drawbacks
Suggestion
a few drawbacks
of finding a
quite
with little or no activity or no agitation ('quiet' is a nonstandard variant for 'quietly')
quiet
place to
concentrace
make denser, stronger, or purer
concentrate
, if an individual is working away from
office but
Accept comma addition
office, but
the merits clearly outweighs the
demrits
an advocate of democratic principles
democrats
in
this
situation.
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  • Personal interaction
  • Distractions
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  • Security concerns
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  • Carbon footprint
  • Remote work
  • Digital platforms
  • Time zones
  • Coordination
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