You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to a problem that I am facing pertaining to my current accommodation. I am Vishakha Trivedi, currently in the final year of the
Pharmacy degree. I reside in Room 206 of hostel building ‘C’. The room that I live in is shared with another student from my stream.
My roommate and I have constant disputes over our lifestyle. I usually prefer to study in a quiet environment, whereas she prefers to party till late Change the word
my
night
. Change preposition
at night
This
is also
affecting my sleep. As a result
of this
I am not able to concentrate on my studies. Add a comma
,this
Moreover
, she does not cooperate with me in tidying the apartment and keeping it clean. I have not received any positive response from her in spite of talking to her about this
a number of times.
I request you to transfer me to another apartment, preferably a single room,
so that I can concentrate on my studies without any worries. Hoping to hear positively from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
VishakhaRemove the comma
apply
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