You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring your attention to a problem that I am facing pertaining to my current accommodation. I am Vishakha Trivedi, currently in the final year of

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Pharmacy degree. I reside in Room 206 of hostel building ‘C’. The room that I live in is shared with another student from my stream. My roommate and I have constant disputes over our lifestyle. I usually prefer to study in a quiet environment, whereas she prefers to party till late

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I am not able to concentrate on my studies.

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, she does not cooperate with me in tidying the apartment and keeping it clean. I have not received any positive response from her in spite of talking to her about

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a number of times. I request you to transfer me to another apartment, preferably a single room

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so that I can concentrate on my studies without any worries. Hoping to hear positively from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Vishakha

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6 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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