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Question--Some people say that TV Advertisement have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views , give your own opinion and include examples from your experience

#question--some #people #tv #advertisement
In
this
 concurrent world, undoubtedly true that advertisement is a debated topic.
Although
 some individuals claim that
advertisment
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the advertisement
advertisement
 is fruitful
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others say that it has
draw backs
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
.I concur that advertisements are beneficial for the societies. On one hand advertised products are generally seen ubiquitous
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Advertisements are based on win
comThistion
 between companies
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in order to attract
plethora
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a plethora
 of customers
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companies promote their products by giving Discounts or they offer buy one get one free are offered by them.
Thus
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clients buy in bulk these products
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they save money
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and
time
 on daily use items
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For instance
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people purchase washing powder and rice commodities on insane sales in the supermarkets and attain benefits for
longer period
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a longer period
longer periods
 of
time
 in minimal spending finance
on
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of
 them
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and humans keep on waiting till
next
 advertisements
on
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for
 the things.
Therefore
, advertisements are not only useful for
companies but
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companies, but
also
 for the society.
On the other hand
 advertisement
are
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is
 harmful for a section of society in which innocent teens are targeted by the adverts.
top-notch concrete reason
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The top-notch concrete reason
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 is that children Particularly force parents to provide expensive toys and unhealthy food to them
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due
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Due
 to unconditional love to their off -springs parents are compelled to purchase products for their children.
For example
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parents do part
time
 jobs to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the wishes of their children to avoid the feelings of
deprived
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the deprived
 in their personality
This
 hard work
creat
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creates
create
great
 family distance because they spend lesser
time
 with each others.
Consequently
, advertisements bring about pros in the society. To conclude
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in my
opinion even
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opinion, even
 though advertisements are having their disadvantages in family life
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yet they are advantageous for people to meet their expenditures wisely by
ambit
 unwanted items in their homes and by guiding their children to explore the harmful effects of
unnessary
not necessary
unnecessary
 products.
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