Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age, for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of the deaths are caused due to
road
accidents. Some people believe that increase in minimum legal
age
, for driving cars or riding motorbikes can avoid the majority of
road
accidents. I slightly agree that
this
is the best way to increase
road
safety
and avoid deaths due to accidents.
Firstly
, dealing with the
road
accidents by raising the legal
age
limit for driving cannot results to
road
safety
because there are many other cases
such
as fines and strict rules that people need to follow.
For instance
, many people are driving the cars and motor vehicles without driving license and other important documents. So,
this
leads to accidents and results to death.So, having a strict rule and fines is
also
a best way to solve
safety
issues.
In contrast
, parents should not encourage their children to drive vehicles until a legal
age
and they should restrict the speed limit in vehicles.
However
, there should be other programs which people need to strictly follow for their
safety
.
For example
, raising the penalty amount can help the majority of the problem as well as it
also
helps to identify people without driving documents with them. So, there should be a regular inspection on busy roads by traffic police is important to improve
road
safety
. In conclusion, by the above aforementioned points, I slightly agree that increasing the minimum legal driving
age
is not only the best to control
safety
. Whereas there are many other ways that the government should implement strictly against the people who broke the traffic rules and there should be other awareness programs in schools on
road
safety
issues and their effects on our lives

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