Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

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Environmental problems are harmful effects of human activity on the
environment
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. Saving the natural
environment
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is humanity's duty for the
benefits
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of both, the
emvironment
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environment
and humans.
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lots of articles about
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environment
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the environment
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,
thesedays
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these days
there are some basic issues that human
being
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must
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about and any of them is as important as the others. 1-Climate change
2-Over population
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2-Overpopulation
3-Resource depletion 4-Water pollution and
other kind
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of pollution like air and soil 5-Urbanization and developing the cities 6-Loss of
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plants
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and
animals
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are some of these issues.
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there are lots of problems that people must be
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about and find some
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believe losing the species of
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and
animals
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is the most important one. I think that
plants
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are insect's food
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when
plants
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species disappear because of
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climate change which is people's fault, it looks like insects have no food,
then
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insects will be disappeared and after a
while
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some
animals
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that are
feeden
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feeding
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by insects will be gone and it won't have stopped, it will be happening for
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of
animals
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and it is a huge modify in
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the natural
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environment
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. In
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humans are changing the life cycle,
unfortunately
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this
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changing
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is a huge damage
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humans and the
environment
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. In order to solve these problems or at least try to solve them, I can mention that we as human
being
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are living unsustainably and we are destroying our natural
environment
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which is nonrenewable, so
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the government
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,
sciencist
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scientist
scientists
and ordinary people must stay
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the same side to protect our world.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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