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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. what causes global warming? what solutions are there to this problem?

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The earth's surface average temperature have been increased since the past decade. It is responsible for harmful effects on our environment. In
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 of all, the deforestation of trees and emission of hazardous taint into the atmosphere from industrial factories results in major part of global warming and the depletion of ozone layer around the earth. One particular good example, which happened recently is the fire in amazon rain forest. Many trees as well as animals were burned and tribes who live in the forest lost their homes. It is important to note that
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 activity is done by a group of people because of construction. So, logging and other factors results in rise of surface temperature.
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, planting more trees and decreasing the emission of smoke from the industrial factories can be the best way to decrease it afflicts.
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 to
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, using of electric vehicles
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 of fuel powered vehicles can be beneficial.
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, many electric vehicles are used in the USA, in the place of fuel vehicles which resulted in the decrease of pollution levels, but
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 there should be strict rules against the logging. So, there should be a rule to use electric vehicles and use of clean energy from the sun in the form of solar power to generate electricity in the place of fossil fuels. By the way of conclusion, I indeed that the deforestation and factories are the main cause for the global warming.
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 can be solved by growing the forests with high yield trees which helps to lower the temperature of the earth's surface by rain. The government should conserve the forests with strict rules against the logging.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climate change
  • Earth's atmosphere
  • Carbon dioxide
  • Methane
  • Nitrous oxide
  • Emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy efficiency
  • Afforestation
  • Carbon footprint
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