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Courses and general online study have recently become very popular. However, some people still prefer to attend classes in person. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In21st century, when the technology is developing steadily that means the education has
also
 changed to provide the demands of people in more convenient and rapid manner.
Therefore
, some people intend to study online course more than the traditional
classes whereas
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classes, whereas
 many people support the opinion that to be present in the classes it will be better. In the following paragraph, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached Online learning is the future of education, and it is happening right now all around us. A student of the future will demand a learning support is appropriate for their situation or context because of online learning is accessible everywhere around the world not
just in a square
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just a square
 room that have a teacher and a whiteboard in the front.
Moreover
,
it
it is
it's
also
 suitable for the person who is a student while working causes of a time is
flexibility
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flexible
.
In addition
, costs of online course
is
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are
 cheaper than show up classes. And It
also give
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also gives
 an opportunity to the student who seek knowledge but lack of funding.
Moreover
, the networked classes offer sitting and learning wherever so do not waste your time on traffic jam to go to learning
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
.
However
, It may be hard to express your thoughts, feelings or opinions in writing and it is difficult to form a real connection with your peers.
Secondly
, traditional
classes
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class
 room course provides face to face instruction that means you are able to ask questions
in
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at
 the moment and educator can help you when you got any problems.
Additionally
, you will get more knowledgeable
thus
, you
be
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are
 able to improve and develop yourself.
Moreover
, there is face-to-face interaction with classmates and networking is easier.
On the other hand
, you must travel to campus and class is held at a specific time and
also
 you must attend.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
you have to work at the speed of the class. In conclusion, there are benefits and drawbacks to both classroom instruction and learning completely online.
However
, these should be weighed and evaluated based on what is important to you, before committing to any degree program.
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