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An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their sencond halves . Do you think that this tendency help people to socialize or does more harm tthan good ? Give your opinon

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Imformation
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Information
 technology now dominates every aspect of our lives
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 It enables us to do everything just by a click
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such
 as
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 Making
phong
electronic equipment that converts sound into electrical signals that can be transmitted over distances and then converts received signals back into sounds
phone
 call
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 using machines to do hard work and so on
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 We even
using
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use
are using
 dating sites in
internet
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the internet
 to find mates
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 In my opinion
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this
 does more harm than good
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 and even leads to some
unexpectable
 consequence
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Firstly
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 we
can not
can not
cannot
 totally know about people whom we messaged
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, because the
perersonal
concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
 photos of those can be edited
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 some misunderstanding situation
may be occur
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may occur
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 As far as I know
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 some people
tends
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tend
 to edit their pictures before
update
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the update
 into networking sites
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 Because they want to be more attractive to
opposie-sex stranger
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the opposite - sex stranger
opposite - sex stranger
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 Of course
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apperance
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
 is the basic of the
first
 sight
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 It can be the attractive feature of
face
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the face
 or body
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 I am sure that almost people pay attention to
apperance
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the appearance
appearance
appearances
 of those whom they talk with
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Secondly
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 internet dating sites contain
variety type
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a variety type
 of people
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 and some of those individuals are predator looking for unsuspected victims
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 They may disguise themselves and come across as kind and
charmimg
pleasing or delighting
charming
 in the beginning
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 Some people can be perturbed and reveal personal
informations
a message received and understood
information
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 It is very dangerous to do that
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 predators will easily perform their purposes for sex or money
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Finally
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 finding a dating object via
internet
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the internet
 make us
depent
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depend
 on technology too much
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 If you guys are far from your girl of boyfriends
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 you always have to pair up with
technology
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technological
 items to chat with them
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 It is impractical for a relationship which you " see " her or his feelings by
typed
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typing
type
 words
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 In short
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 in order to not fall into unavoidable circumstance
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 we
muts
be compelled, be necessary, have to, ought to
must
 always stay awake and protect ourself over exotic strangers.

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