Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education. How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

As far as the spending of
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
capital is concerned, every
government
has specific budget allocation for every segment.
budgeting
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Budgeting
,
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,
it self
the thing named or in question
it
itself
is, very important aspect of every
governemt's
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government's
governments'
agenda.
This
is
smple rule
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a simple rule
simple rule
the simple rule
sample rule
simply rule
that the more you
put the
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put, the
more you able to get back.
Education
is one of the most imminent aspect any
government
keeps in
veiw
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
view
while budgeting.
Education
is something which gives
back it's
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back, it's
true
investement
the act of investing; laying out money or capital in an enterprise with the expectation of profit
investment
interest. If
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
is investing in
education
this
shows how serious is
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
for the future of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
people. It takes years to build
strong educated nation
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a strong, educated nation
a strong educated nation
and
this
is only possible while making
substaintial
fairly large
substantial
investments into
education sector
Suggestion
the education sector
.
Education
can guarantee the
development
any
government
looks and desires for, an educated
government
will invest heavily on
education
as it know how important is to be educated.
This
is the
scintific
of or relating to the practice of science
scientific
era where there is a lot of
comeptetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
computation
in every field. If you are to compete the rest of
world
Suggestion
the world
and want to have
an
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a
specific identification, you need to be well equipped with the modern technologies, and the attainment of advancement is only possible by means of
education
. Art is
also
very important social segment
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a very important social segment
the very important social segment
. Art has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own place among several other sectors. There should proper budget allocation for
art
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artistic
development
. As far as my point of view is concerned, art is part of
education
and not
education
is
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
part. So if some
government
is paying heed to
education
development
, it means the
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
is serious to cater it's art
also
. Both segments are of much
imporatance but
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importance, but
importance but
education
is the key element, If only the
education
is focused, it will return back the
development
for everything.

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