In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience.

In my own nation, individuals have faced various types of problem regarding their

health

because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. I will discuss both reasons and solutions and give relevant examples in upcoming paragraph. The main reason that people can face problems regarding to their

health

Firstly

90% people prefer to eat fast

food

because it is very tasty and spicy.

For example

; after eating fast

food

, they come home and go to sleep. They do not do any short walk and

exercise

. To exemplify in a better way, people eat fast

food

and avoid homemade

food

. Fast

food

is very dangerous for our

health

because it is very oily and unhealthy

food

so it is very effective in our

body

Hence

people eat fast

food

, that's why they face problems. Another significant reason is that people do not do any exercises because they have not time to do

exercise

to maintain their

body

fit and healthy. To exemplify in a better way if people cannot do any exercises or yoga than they never maintain their

body

fit.

Moreover

, many people are those who cannot do any job or work and they spend their time on games, tv etc. And they do not care about their

health

, that's why they will

also

face problems regarding their

health

On the other hand

, every problem has

solution

Suggestion

solved

that

individual

Suggestion

individuals

an individual

can take care about their

health

Firstly

, they can make a

shedule

plan for an activity or event

schedule

to fit their

body

For

example they

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example, they

can do

exercise

and yoga in their daily routine that's why they can easily maintain their

body

fit and live

healthy life

Suggestion

a healthy life

healthy lives

Moreover

, they can avoid fast

food

and prefer to eat homemade

food

then

they can easily protect their

health

from problems. In conclusion, according to my opinion, If people want to protect their

health

from

problems

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problems, then

then

they can do

exercise

daily and avoid fast

food

and prefer to eat only healthy

food

which is good for their

health

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4Word repetition
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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary lifestyle
technological advancements
fast food
processed food
dietary choices
stressful work environments
neglect
health education
consequences
advertising
health programs
active living
policies
availability
nutrition studies
conducive environments
pedestrian areas
media campaigns
healthy lifestyle
risks

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