In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience.

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In my own nation, individuals have faced various types of problem regarding their

health

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because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. I will discuss both reasons and solutions and give relevant examples in upcoming paragraph. The main reason that people can face problems regarding to their

health

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90% people prefer to eat fast

food

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because it is very tasty and spicy.

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; after eating fast

food

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, they come home and go to sleep. They do not do any short walk and

exercise

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. To exemplify in a better way, people eat fast

food

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and avoid homemade

food

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. Fast

food

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is very dangerous for our

health

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because it is very oily and unhealthy

food

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so it is very effective in our

body

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people eat fast

food

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, that's why they face problems. Another significant reason is that people do not do any exercises because they have not time to do

exercise

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to maintain their

body

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fit and healthy. To exemplify in a better way if people cannot do any exercises or yoga than they never maintain their

body

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fit.

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, many people are those who cannot do any job or work and they spend their time on games, tv etc. And they do not care about their

health

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, that's why they will

also

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face problems regarding their

health

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On the other hand

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, every problem has

solution

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solved

that

individual

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individuals

an individual

can take care about their

health

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, they can make a

shedule

plan for an activity or event

schedule

to fit their

body

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example they

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example, they

can do

exercise

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and yoga in their daily routine that's why they can easily maintain their

body

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fit and live

healthy life

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a healthy life

healthy lives

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, they can avoid fast

food

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and prefer to eat homemade

food

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then

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they can easily protect their

health

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from problems. In conclusion, according to my opinion, If people want to protect their

health

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from

problems

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problems, then

then

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they can do

exercise

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daily and avoid fast

food

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and prefer to eat only healthy

food

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which is good for their

health

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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330 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary lifestyle
technological advancements
fast food
processed food
dietary choices
stressful work environments
neglect
health education
consequences
advertising
health programs
active living
policies
availability
nutrition studies
conducive environments
pedestrian areas
media campaigns
healthy lifestyle
risks

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In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience.

Fully explain your ideas

The pollution is increasing day bay day suggest some solutions.

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centers is for privately owned cars to be banned, others however, think this is an unrealistic solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The percentage of overweight children has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes of this disturbing trend and suggest solutions to this problem.

Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents. What is the reason? What problems can this cause?