It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Workout plays a very

integerial

existing as an essential constituent or characteristic

integral

part in our day to day life and it

also

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helps our upcoming generation pupils to become more

porficient

having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude

proficient

in their daily activities

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So we must

impliment

apply in a manner consistent with its purpose or design

implement

it in their daily co-

circullar

of or relating to an academic course of study

curricular

activities for

the good

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better

health and wealth. Some of people argue that sports

makes

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make

their children more lethargic towards their studies and distract their mind in different kind of

mischevious

naughtily or annoyingly playful

mischievous

things.

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Moreover parents

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Moreover, parents

main concern for their children is secured future and they think sports is dominated by luck, so we

can not

can not

cannot

give our whole life to something which is fluctuated each and every time.

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example there

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example, there

is a survey by United states of

america

North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776

America

sports administration and they found out that 80% students get over with sports and opted to choose other activities which is hand in hand helpful with their studies

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as well

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However

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However, on

on the other hand

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the majority of people acknowledge that these

type

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types

of

activites

any specific behavior

activities

makes

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make

teenagers mentally strong and

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makes us physically fit for our future goals.

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Additionally each

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every kid is having some kind of

born

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bearing

talent in different kind of re-

creational

someone who has committed a crime or has been legally convicted of a crime

criminal

ativities

any specific behavior

activities

which makes them unique in their own way and

some times

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

they choose that

sport

a point located with respect to surface features of some region

spot

as their

fulltime

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full time

career.

Leoniel

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Lonely

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Messi is the great evidence in front of our eyes who started playing football

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since

his childhood days and selected by

Barcelona team

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a Barcelona team

when he was a student. They helped him to enhance his skill and the rest is history. So in the end if we look for a

broder

having great (or a certain) extent from one side to the other

broader

breeder

birder

picture than we must encourage our

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

to learn and play sports, which helps their kids to

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their stress from their hectic world

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