You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'
m
writing to you,
because there are some issues with my Remove the comma
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roommate
room mate
and I'Correct your spelling
roommate
m
hoping, that we could find a solution for that.
It's been two month
now, that I'Change to a plural noun
months
m
sharing a room
with Isabelle. She has visitors coming over most days of the week and they stay until late at night, without being quiet and respectful..
So even with earplugs, I don't get much sleep. Even Replace the punctuation
.
...
at
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in
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the daytime
daytime
she's always listening to loud music, which is Add a comma
,daytime
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affecting
effecting
my studies Correct your spelling
affecting
everyday
. She's always leaving the Replace the word
every day
room
really messy and never cleans up,
when it's her turn. On top of that, I can smell weed in our Remove the comma
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room
. I haven't seen her smoking, but she's either doing it,
when I'Remove the comma
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m
not around or at least she's storing something somewhere.
I've talked to her about it already several times and had a friend of us
helping with that as well. But it's not changing. So I'Correct pronoun usage
ours
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hoping that I would be able to change rooms. I'm
still happy to share it with someone,
if there is no single Remove the comma
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room
available.
Thanks in advance.
Kind regards
Maria.Submitted by anitanayaka783 on
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