Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

It is quite interesting to know that the number of vegetarians in our society is steadily increasing. Different people choose to be vegetarians for different reasons ranging from cultural beliefs, religion, age and geographical locations. Though every human requires a balanced diet to maintain a healthy
lifestyle but
Accept comma addition
lifestyle, but
vegetarianism is believed to have some unique
advantages
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advantage
health wise too, especially among the older generation.
To begin
with, there is a popular saying which goes
thus
: "health is wealth", and as we grow older, we tend to pay closer attention and be extra careful about our eating habit and health. It is
therefore
not surprising to discover that majority of the people in the older age bracket fall under the vegetarian category. An example to buttress
this
is
the high
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the highest
volume presence of cholesterol and fat in fishes and meats, which according to doctors, high consumption of
this
is not a perfect way to maintain a healthy lifestyle. For some, their religious beliefs
doesn't support
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don't support
the killing nor eating of animals. A
relatable
case is that of
muslims
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslims
. While for some others, their cultural beliefs
is
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are
that killing and eating of animals is cruelty against the animals. Personally,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe vegetarians play a huge role in
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
preservation. Their abstinence from the consumption of meat and fish helps in the conservation of
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
, because with increase demand for fish and meat automatically means the capture and slaughter of animals that would have played a minute role in preventing global warming and keeping the
ecological
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ecologically
stratosphere balanced. In conclusion, it is notable to say that the present society maintains a balance between vegetarians and non-vegetarians.
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