Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However, some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?

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IT IS OFTEN SAID BY SOME THAT GEOGRAPHY SHOULD BE MADE COMPULSARY DURING

SCHOOL

STUDIES. WHEREAS, OTHERS OPPOSE

THIS

IDEA BY SAYING THAT

SCHOOL

SHOULD TEACH CHILDREN MORE REGARDING

LIFE

AS AS

SUBJECT

THIS

ESSAY WILL STATHE THE OPINION THAT LEARNIG GEOGRQAPHY AND ABOUT

LIFE

SUBJECT

BOTH SHOULD BE GIVEN AN EQUAL PRIORITY IN

SCHOOL

FOR ALL THE PUPILS BECAUSE OF THEIR BENEFITS. TO START WITH, THE PRIME REASON FOR TEACHING GIPOGRAPHY IN

SCHOOL

IS THAT IT INCREASES THE

KNOWLEDGE

OF THEIR OWN COUNTRY'S GEOGRAPHY

SUCH

AS, WHERE IS IN HE WORLD'S MAP, HOW MUCH AREA IT IS COVERING AND SO ON. TO ELABORATE, IF IT OS TAUGHT IN THE

SCHOOL

THEN

AFTER THE ADULTHOOD, WHEN ONE WANTS TO KNOW MORE ABOUT IT HE CAN. BECAUSE HE IS ALREADY KNOWING BASIC ABOUT IT. AND IF NOT

THEN

ATLEST HE WILL HAVE SOME GENERAL

KNOWLEDGE

. FOR AN EXAMPLE, AFTER SCHOLLING

Accept space

OFFSPRING MIGHT HAVE INTEREST IN KNOWNING MORE ABOUT GEOGRAPHY,

THEN

PERSON CAN EASILY GO FOR

FURTHER

EDUCATION IN THAT FIELD WITHOUT CARING ANY FEAR. IF NOT

THEN

THAT

KNOWLEDGE

CAN BE HELPFUL IN GETTING GOVERNMENT JOBS

SUCH

AS UPSC, GPSC ETC. IN THAT EXAM THERE USED TO BE MORE QUESTIONS RELATED TO GENERAL

KNOWLEDGE

SO INFORMATION FROM SCHOOLING EDUCATION MAY BE BENEFICIAL IN RESERVING AUTHORITY WORK. ON HE OTHER HAND, IT IS

ALSO

ESSENTIAL THAT JUVENILES ARE GETING ENOUGH TEACHING ABOUT

LIFE

SUCH

AS, HOW TO BE A GOOD MEMBER OF THE SOCIETY AS WELL AS CIVILIAN, WHAT IS OUR RESPONSIBILTY AS HUMAN IN THE WORLD. TO ILLUSTRATE, AS CHILDHOOD IS STAGE OF JUVENILE IN WHICH THEY ARE EASILY INFLUENCE BY OTHER UNNECCESSARY THINGS. AND

SCHOOL

IS A PLACE WHERE THEY ARE SPENDING THEIR MOST OF TIME IN COMPARE TO FAMILY.SO IF GUIDANCE ABOUT

LIFE

PROVIDED IN THE

SCHOOL

WILL AFFECT MORE THAN THEIR OWN EXPERIENCE. FOR AN INSTANCE, I GOT SOME LESSIONS FROM MY

SCHOOL

TEACHER WHILE I WAS STUDYING IN THE 5TH GRADE. THAT TIM WE HAD

SUBJECT

CALLED GUJARATI. IN THAT, THERE WERE LOT OF STORIES WRITEN BY WRITERS AND POEMS. AL USED TO GIVE SOME MESSAGES AT THE END OF EACH STORY. DUE TO

SUCH

SUBJECT

I LEARNT HOW TO BE KIND TO OTHER HUMANS, GAIN RESPECT FOR MY ELDERS AND KO THE VALUE OF ENVIRONMENT ETC. IN MY OPINION, FOR ME

SCHOOL

SHOULD HAVE THESE ALL SUBJETFROM WHCIH THEY CAN BUILD THEIR GOOD FUTURE AS WELL AS MAKE THEIR

LIFE

MORE BEAUTIFUL. TO SUM UP, IT IS TRUE THAT MORE

SUBJECT

GIVES MORE STRESS ON THE CHILDREN BUT IF PLAN WISELY, LIKE WHICH

SUBJECT

IS IMPORTANT AS PER THE GRADE.

THEN

I AM SURE IT WILL BE MANAGABLE FPOR BOTH FOR MENTORS AND FOR LEARNERS.

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However, some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

In some places old age is valued, while in other culture youth is considered more importance. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying medicines and treatments by themselves instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Attending a live performance (for example, a play, a concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?