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Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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We are living in the world where
art
 is important in every part of the society. In
this
regard some
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regard, some
 people consider that
art
such
 as painting,
poetry
,
music etc
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music, etc.
music etc.
; is easy to create by anyone.
However
, others conceive that there are some special human skills are required to build
art
. In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
 depends on individuals; what type of
art
 they want to create. It is indeed true that anyone in
this
 world
create
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creates
art
.
Art
 is
a
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an
 imagination that
represent
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represents
 in
form
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the form
 of painting,
poetry
 or
music
. A person who has good imagination can easily make
art
.
Although
, one can dream anything aesthetic picture in their mind and will draw certainly paint of that picture as a painting. To write a poem is easy by some people, they just have to express their feeling in the words to make
poetry
. One the other hand, despite
create
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creating
art
such
 as
poetry
 or
music
, we would be requisite some skills and special abilities. To become a musician,
for example
, we have to learn all "Ragas" of
music
 and how to play musical instruments
such
 as guitar, keyboard, harmonium
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
; to create
music
. In spite of being
painter
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a painter
, a person has to have strong subconscious and imagination power to generate
great visual picture
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a great visual picture
 on the paper as a real painting.
Finally
,
art
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at
such
 a write poems has required to read other authors' literature or
poetry
 in order to get
basic idea
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a basic idea
the basic idea
 of making
structure
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the structure
structures
 of poems to make great and lovely
poetry
, so that people would like and appreciate it. All in all, I opine that, some arts are easy to create for anyone, while others
such
 as
music
 or
poetry
 are obligatory to learn special skills to generate
excellence
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excellent
art
.

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  • universal form of expression
  • inherent aspect
  • specialized skills
  • innate talent
  • specialized training
  • evokes deep emotions
  • resonates
  • folk art
  • street art
  • digital media
  • traditional institutions
  • formal education
  • groundbreaking contributions
  • rigorous training
  • profound art
  • inclusive activity
  • meaningful work
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