Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult.Do you agree or disagree?

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is challenging situation

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is a challenging situation

for both the rich and the poor students who want to study

in

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at

university for higher education.I strongly agree with

this

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statement as

financial condition

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the financial condition

of poor students and not good in study for rich students. With regards to poor students, who have willingness to gain higher education from best universities but

they

of them or themselves

their

cannon.The main reason for they always suffer from

lake

the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable

lack

of money and universities' enormous fees

execarbate

make worse

exacerbate

exacerbated

this

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problem.

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, the

reacherch

systematic investigation to establish facts

research

conducted by

Cambridge Economic Department

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the Cambridge Economic Department

reported that 70% of

student

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who live below the poverty line cannot able to

enroll

register formally as a participant or member

enrol

degree courses in universities because

insufficent

of a quantity not able to fulfill a need or requirement

insufficient

money.

Conversaly

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Conversely

, rich students have better financial condition, but poor result in competitive or previous exams

become

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becomes

serious problemfor

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a serious problem for

serious problem for

those

,

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,

because most of the universities has its merit list for admission, so if one

have

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has

to educate in

this

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university, he or she have to get above or equal grades in exams.

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, nowadays many rich

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student

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students

prefer to study abroad

university but

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university, but

the condition of

this

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univrsities

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university

universities

is 6.5 band score in each module of IELTS exams

,

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,

which is a competitive exam of an

ENglish

an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries

English

language

,

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,

But many

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student

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students

cannot achieve

this

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band score. In conclusion, getting admission in universities is serious problems for many

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student regardless

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students, regardless

students regardless

of the poverty and the richness.Some

intiative

readiness to embark on bold new ventures

initiative

initiatives

intuitive

would be taken by

government

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the government

for

this

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stddents

a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution

student

,

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,

since education is

right

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the right

of every

people

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person

.