ordinary people try to copy famous people either magazine or watching tv.why do they do this?do you think its a good idea to copy famous people?

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It has become a trend today that

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most common people seek to imitate the popular people

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happening at a time subsequent to a reference time

after

they read about them on magazine and newspaper.There are several

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reasons

reason

for

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definite article

the

public to follow the

celeberities

a widely known person

celebrities

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beileve

accept as true; take to be true

believe

its

the thing named or in question

is not good for an individual to imitate the

celeberites

a widely known person

celebrities

as it affect the personality and individuality of the person.

To begin

with, there are several

raeson

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reasons

reason

behind

this

trend.The

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

of the famous people

are

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attractive and the common people want the same attraction and lifestyle in their

life

.Most

ofthe

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of the

people get temporary satisfaction and happiness

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happening at a time subsequent to a reference time

after

they follow their hair style or dressing,.But it has a detrimental

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

on the personal

life

and future.

for

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For

instance many

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instance, many

theft

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thefts

have been reported when the young people try to follow the

luxuary

something that is an indulgence rather than a necessity

luxury

life

style of the

celeberites

a widely known person

celebrities

moreover every

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Moreover, every

Moreover every

individual is different from one person to

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

interms

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in terms

of talent, and personality.

when

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When

try to imitate other, he or she may

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their

personalityand

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personality and

spoil their carrier.

For example

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when

some one

a human being

someone

with good singing talent

try

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tries

to imitate a model

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he may become a failure in his

life

.It is important for a person to identify his talent and look forward for it.It is a misconception

amoung

in the middle of

among

the most of people that

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the

celeberities

a widely known person

celebrities

have a cheerful and

enjoyment

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enjoy

enjoyable

life

.It is important for an individual to understand that the enjoyment and happiness is

depent

be contingent upon (something that is elided)

depend

on several other factor

moreover

personal cont.

entment

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Ointment

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major factor

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a major factor

the major factor

to be happy in

life

To conclude

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it is not healthy for an individual to follow the

celeberitries

a widely known person

celebrities

in their

life

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as it affect their own individuality and

oersionality

the ability to think and act independently

originality

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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ordinary people try to copy famous people either magazine or watching tv.why do they do this?do you think its a good idea to copy famous people?

Fully explain your ideas

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by other of the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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