You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, ● introduce yourself ● explain how you learned about the internship ● explain why you would be suitable for the internship

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Dear Grant, I would like to express my interest in the Software Developer Internship at your company, Electric Mind. My name is Vaibhav Parmar and I am a Computer Science student at York University. I am about to complete my 3rd year in

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degree and I am actively looking for an early talent opportunity. I have been following your company's page on LinkedIn to receive updates about upcoming jobs and not long ago, I noticed a Software Developer Intern role on it. Looking at the role, it instantly attracted me as I want to work for a growing start-up organization and your company is one of them. I believe I can be a perfect fit for

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as I bring the required skill sets with excellent communication skills. My academic projects, participation in various hackathon competitions and volunteering for community projects are testimony to my ability to perform in a collaborative environment. My soft skills are a great addition to my technical skills and problem-solving mindset.

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, I think that I would be the most suitable candidate for

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. I will be glad to come and visit your office once to inform more about myself.

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, I appreciate your time and deliberation! Hope to hear from you soon! Yours sincerely, Vaibhav Parmar

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coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking your paragraphs into smaller, focused sections to enhance clarity and ensure each idea is clearly developed in its own space.

task achievement

Make sure to provide a slightly more detailed explanation of why you are passionate about the role or how your skills specifically align with the tasks mentioned in the internship description.

tone

The letter has a friendly and respectful tone, which is appropriate for a professional correspondence.

task achievement

You clearly introduced yourself and outlined how you discovered the internship, making the letter personal and relevant.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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