Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitian cities with people from all over the world. How can government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously.

In today's volatile world, going abroad is a widespread phenomenon
inavitably
in such a manner as could not be otherwise
inevitably
inevitable
. An
aboundance
the property of a more than adequate quantity or supply
abundance
of people who want to live
forign
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
countries are increasing.
However
, they cannot live with local public harmoniously. In
this
essay, many points will be given with my personal viewpoint before a rewarding summary is reached.
First
of all, I reckon that going overseas is the best way to find fellows who are native and you can improve your ability of learning language.
However some
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However, some
natives do not take off people who are incomer cannot
work
at high level
work
. In my opinion,
this
abominable side to live with incomers.
Secondly
, one of the
reason
Suggestion
reasons
for
this
is religious discrepancies between the citizens of the two countries. In my opinion,
relegious
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
religious
buildings should be built by the government and in the construction, representatives of both
reagious
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
religious
should be involved. Taking all things into consideration, I would tend to mention that the government ensure that people can live together harmoniously
with
Suggestion
to
work
as citizens
work
and built
relegious
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
religious
buildings.

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