Some people think that it is beneficial to young children if sent to Nursery School before starting Primary School. Other people think that Young Children should spend time with Family than going to Nursery School. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today's
time
everybody is busy in shaping their career and reaching prestigious heights and
this
has reached to a point where we hardly get
time
to spend with our family, though it has become a necessity for all the members of the family to work in order to get a better life.
Firstly let's
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Firstly, let's
discuss about the people who think that it is beneficial to send their young children to
nursery
school
before starting their primary
school
. Now a
days
Suggestion
day
a few of the people are very determined about the fact that children should be sent to
nursery
school
because as per them
this
will play an important role in the growth of the kids be it mental or physical. The kids who will attend pre- primary
school
will get an advantage to learn things better when they will start their regular schooling.
This
also
will help them to become disciplined a little more active and
also
gives a stress free feel to their parents as they know their dear ones are in safe hands. Now let's discuss about the other
scenerio
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scenarios
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(formal) where, in what respect
wherein
the parents believe that young children should spend
time
with family than going to
nursery
school
. The reason behind
such
a thought is perhaps to teach their loved ones the family values and
also
not to ruin their
childhood
by giving them any kind of stress by
bounding
rebounding from an impact (or series of impacts)
bouncing
bending
bundling
pounding
bonding
them. Sending the young ones to
school
at an early age might not give them the
time
to become comfortable with their family plus might fail to teach them several social values too. Keeping them home during the early
childhood
days will let the parents cherish the
childhood
of their kids and
this
creates a strong bond between parents and their young ones. In my opinion, it's better to keep the toddler at home rather than sending them to
nursery
school
because the
time
spent with family will give their
childhood
a good start. The little ones can be taught at home too and if get the opportunity to stay with grandparents or one of the parents
then
can learn to differentiate amongst right and wrong too.
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