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More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good thing or bad thing?

#people #time #movies
Many people have watched movies every
time
. Obviously, viewers can find films a different quality. Some people believe that
this
 activity has more advantages, others find disadvantages. I think, if film a good quality, people should watch it. On the one hand, people like to spend their leisure
time
 interesting. Some pictures could be a
masterpieces
Suggestion
masterpiece
, so
time
 is worth it to watch and spend free
time
. In
this
 case, it is a good opportunity to go to the cinema;
for
example
, for a date. At the same
time
, what could be better to watch a comedy with close friends. I think, it is good entertainment among them.
Moreover
, documentaries can teach us something new without any boring books.
On the other hand
, people can waste
time
 watching movies. Sometimes, films can be like a drags;
for
example
, TV shows. I suggest, people could postpone important matters to watch their favourite show.
For
example
, film fans prefer to watch movies
instead
 chores;
therefore
, they need more
time
 for family and work.
In addition
, sometimes people see a distorted reality on TV.
As a result
, they begin to believe in fake news and images.
Nevertheless
, today people have
opportunity
Suggestion
the opportunity
an opportunity
 to watch movies in different formats;
for
example
, people should choose 3d or IMAX format to see and feel all special effects. It makes modern films more live that motivate to watch movies more. In conclusion,
it
it is
it's
 so important to feel the difference between
waste
Suggestion
wasting
time
 and watching a good movie. People can spend their free
time
 watching movies usefully. I think, it is important to choose film accurately to
do not
Accept comma addition
do, not
 waste
time
 in a future.
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