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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there other better way. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There have been a lot of debates about the most effective method to enhance the
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 on the roads. Some are of the
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 of reduction of the maximum speed limits while others are of a thought of other methods
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 can be achieved. In my
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, I think there are other effective methods that can be implemented to reduce accidents on our roads. On one hand, by reducing maximum speed limits will bring about tremendous changes on our roads as drivers will be begin to drive at lesser speed limits so as to consider pedestrians and other vehicles on both the highways and on the streets.
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, at the school zone areas where there are schools, speed limits are reduced to 20MPH (Miles per hour) at certain hours of the day that students and children are coming to the school and are
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 leaving for their houses at the end of the day.
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 has reduced accidents at school zones and more
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 for the children plying these roads during these hours.
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, some are of the
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 of other methods that there are better ways of bringing protections to road users which I agree with. Introduction of stringent monetary fines to careless drivers will bring about sanity on the road. If drivers go beyond the speed limit and get caught, they should be made to pay heavy monetary value or driver's license suspension for some period of time like 6 months,
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 will make commuters to be more
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 conscious as they would not want to pay a heavy fine or getting their driving license banned as
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 can prohibit them from driving for a period of time or even for life. In conclusion, while people may vary in their
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, I believe there are other ways that can be explored to bring more sanity and
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 to our roads.
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