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Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think that it is essential to learn. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The linear chart compares the rate of wheat exported by 3 various nations (Australia, Canada, and the European community) over the given period of 5 years from 1985 to 1990. The unit
is measured
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measures
 in million tonnes. Overall, a brief assessment of the chart reveals that export of wheat in Canada surprisingly remained constant
by
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from
 1990 while
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 trend
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in
 the European community biased upwards.
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, Australia saw a slight drop-off at the same time. In 1985, Canada, with just under 20 million tonnes (
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mt
a radioactive transuranic element
Mt
) accounted for the largest exporter in comparison with the European community and Australia with around 17mt and 15mt exports respectively.
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 figure for Canada, after some massive fluctuations, remained unchanged by the end of the period. Despite the fact that European community’s international wheat
marketing
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market
 declined slightly in commencing years, it was boosting steadily,
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, overtook Canada in late 1988, and reaching by far the highest amount of approximate 22mt in 1990. In terms of Australia, with the exception of a brief booming at the start of the period,
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 market marginally decreased to just above 10mt in the final year.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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