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Some people believe that entertainers are more importance then scientist. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many folk argued that those who entertains are far more paramount
then
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than
experimentalist
in an experimental fashion
experimentally
 as they always live in the limelight and enjoy luxury lifestyle
whereas
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Whereas
scientist
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scientific
 works in the shadow and only gain public recognition after a successful project. I completely agree with the statement
,
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,
in
this
 essay I
will
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Will
 provide example to support my view.
To begin
 with, people believe that fame and wages in entertainment profession,
such
 as fashions, cinemas or sports increase rapidly as they gain an ability
to
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To
 influence young generation lifestyle. To illustrate
,
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,
corporate companies hire a movie star to advertise their product since youngster, who follow them will
definitely
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Definitely
 buy it. So, more the fan following an celebrity have, he or she
receive
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receives
 more attraction.
Also
, being a scientist is a privilege and only
few
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a few
 can achieve
this but
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this, but
 they always work behind the scene and
its
it is
it's
 a
rare
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rarity
 that their project
receive
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receives
countrywise
occurring or extending throughout a country or nation
countrywide
recognition
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Recognition
 and they become eye of the public.
For example
, Mr. K Sivan the director of ISRO recently
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