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All around the globe every year many animal species become extinct. However some people feel that government should be concerned more with solving problems of human life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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All around the world the
extinction
 of many
species
 increasing every year.
However certain
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However, certain
 people believe that
government
sholud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
concerned
Suggestion
concern
 more solving issues of human
life
. Both the view points are discussed in
this
 essay. On the one hand, saving endangered animals is an important issue that needs to be done. The
orginal
preceding all others in time or being as first made or performed
original
ordinal
 form of
food chain
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the food chain
a food chain
 and ecosystem are broken due to
extinction
 of many
species
. Without a diversity of animal
species
,
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,
 it will bring a negative impact to
human
Suggestion
the human
 who is the top of any food chain.
Secondly
, the
extinction
 of endangered
species
 will give a high risk of ecological
disasters especailly
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disasters, especially
disasters especially
 for endangered animals which has benefits to humans and
environment
Suggestion
the environment
.
Therefore
, the
extinction
 of animals is an important problem to solve by the
government
.
On the other hand
, humans are part of
great cycle
Suggestion
the great cycle
 of
life
 on earth. Nowadays, the environmental
calamaties
an event resulting in great loss and misfortune
calamities
 like earthquakes, floods and others are increasing.
This
 causes a loss of infrastructure and resources. To reform the structures to its original state and to continue the human
existence it
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existence, it
 requires a lot of support from
government
.
Moreover
, in undeveloped countries, more people are living under the poverty line.
Thus it
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Thus, it
 is more necessary to concentrate more on the
life
 of human as well as the social welfare.
Although
,
tge
definite article
the
government
should gives
Suggestion
should give
 more importance to human's
life
, one cannot ignore that, it is
also
 the responsibility of
government
 to save the animals which are facing
extinction
 to our coming generation.

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