All around the globe every year many animal species become extinct. However some people feel that government should be concerned more with solving problems of human life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

All around the world the

extinction

of many

species

increasing every year.

However certain

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However, certain

people believe that

government

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expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

concerned

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concern

more solving issues of human

life

. Both the view points are discussed in

this

essay. On the one hand, saving endangered animals is an important issue that needs to be done. The

orginal

preceding all others in time or being as first made or performed

original

ordinal

form of

food chain

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the food chain

a food chain

and ecosystem are broken due to

extinction

of many

species

. Without a diversity of animal

species

,

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,

it will bring a negative impact to

human

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the human

who is the top of any food chain.

Secondly

, the

extinction

of endangered

species

will give a high risk of ecological

disasters especailly

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disasters, especially

disasters especially

for endangered animals which has benefits to humans and

environment

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the environment

.

Therefore

, the

extinction

of animals is an important problem to solve by the

government

.

On the other hand

, humans are part of

great cycle

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the great cycle

of

life

on earth. Nowadays, the environmental

calamaties

an event resulting in great loss and misfortune

calamities

like earthquakes, floods and others are increasing.

This

causes a loss of infrastructure and resources. To reform the structures to its original state and to continue the human

existence it

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existence, it

requires a lot of support from

government

.

Moreover

, in undeveloped countries, more people are living under the poverty line.

Thus it

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Thus, it

is more necessary to concentrate more on the

life

of human as well as the social welfare.

Although

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the

government

should gives

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should give

more importance to human's

life

, one cannot ignore that, it is

also

the responsibility of

government

to save the animals which are facing

extinction

to our coming generation.