Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacations. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view
While some people are in favour of giving several short vacations to children, others opine that one long
vacation
is much better. In my opinion, children will benefit more if they get several short holidays during the course of the academic year.
There are many advantages to short vacations. To start with, children can take a break from studies frequently. Sometimes taking a short vacation
can help children get rid of their mental stress. Nowadays we see that most children attend private coaching classes after school and hence
they get hardly any spare time
. This
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vacation
in between exams they can relax themselves, get rid of their mental stress and feel refreshed. When they get short vacation
, they have enough time
to spend with their loved ones. They can go to their relative’s house and spend time
with them which
we don’t see these days.
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vacation
also
has its advantages. When they have long vacations they can join some coaching classes like football coaching, swimming, drawing or dancing etc. They can also
travel to distant tourist destinations. However
, in my opinion, in this
age of intense competition and the pressure to excel in both curricular and co-curricular activities, children need small breaks from time
to time
to recharge themselves.
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, considering the amount of pressure that children have to deal with on a day-to-day basis, I would recommend more short vacations than one long vacation
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