Some people say that now we cans see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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It is often argued by some people that movies are best experienced in theatres whereas they are another group of people who debate that it is unnecessary to go to a cinema. I completely agree with the group who prefer watching a film on the big screen.

This

essay will discuss how watching movies in the cinema can enhance the experience and

secondly

, explain how budget-friendly it is to watch films on smartphones and iPads. On the one hand, the sound and visual effects of a movie can really enhance the viewing experience significantly when watching in a theatre which I agree with.

This

is because most of the theatres are equipped with Dolby Atmos, a sound technology that has surround support and enables virtualization and it literally makes human beings believe that it is real.

Similarly

, the picture quality is

also

different compared to traditional television and mobile screens as they are Ultra-high-definition quality which does more justice to the pixels.

For example

, Warner Brothers, a film production company has publicly mentioned in the media that 79% of the audience preferred theatres than renting out digital DVD’s to watch movies.

On the other hand

, watching films on handheld devices can save pupils a lot of money. With

increased technology and budget

Suggestion

increased technology and budgets

the increased technology and budget

for films over the years has skyrocketed the prices of movie tickets which is making it extremely difficult for the economically-challenged people to watch it in the theatres.

However

, with the alternate options of viewing movies on tablets with the help of applications

such

as Netflix & Amazon prime, to name a few, are streaming services which let people stream good collection of

latest movies

Suggestion

the latest movies

and had

also

made it available on devices

such

as smartphones and tablets for the user convenience and accessibility. To illustrate, Netflix, a streaming giant has published an article on The Times magazine stating that there has been a 178% rise in their subscriptions after reducing their prices and making it available on

hand-held

small and light enough to be operated while you hold it in your hands

handheld

devices. In conclusion, despite varied opinions, viewing movies in theatres can create a wholesome experience for the people as they have better visual and sound quality.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people say that now we cans see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Include an introduction and conclusion

nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. do you think is a positive or a negative development?

What impact does the tool have on planning and policy-making for future governments?

Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to older more traditional values such as respect for the and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.